The Time Machine at HCT

Last night I went to Hale Theatre for the world premiere of The Time Machine, an original work by local playwright Michael D. Fox inspired by the novella of the same name by H.G. Wells. The premise is an interesting one and the sets, projections, and special effects are very impressive but, unfortunately, the narrative is a mess. Fifteen-year-old Skye Mason (Mariah Grace Bowman) opens a mysterious package meant for her grandmother Helene Briggs (Lori Rees) and discovers a puzzle box containing a handwritten manuscript of The Time Machine by H.G. Wells. Helene panics when she sees the manuscript because she believes it is a desperate message across time telling her that she is in danger. She reveals that the story in the manuscript is real and that it was inspired by her travels to the future in a machine of her own invention. A young Helene (Amber Dodge) travels to the far future and returns to 1888 with a powerful source of energy stolen from a savage group known as the Morlocks. Fearing what use might be made of such a powerful object she seeks advice from her friend Gregory Whitman (Kaden Caldwell) and her fiance H.G. Wells (Dallin Suman). She ultimately decides that she should take the power source to the future and hide it and, since she cannot go back to a specific time and place more than once, she stays in 1988 and makes a life for herself. However, the message from Wells sends her and her granddaughter on a journey through time to keep the power source safe from someone with plans to abuse it. The way the original novella is integrated into a new story is clever but I found it really convoluted (lots of overly complicated exposition about time travel), hard to follow (lots of jumps between timelines and relationships between characters that are not very explicit), and inconsistent (there are a few elements that did not make sense to me). I definitely think this could have used another draft before it was performed for an audience (I usually do not have this much trouble following a plot). What really impressed me about this production, however, is the set!  I was intrigued by it the moment I took my seat because it is made up of large geometric panels that move to form concentric circles through which different set pieces (including an elaborate time machine) move on and off stage and on which various images are projected. I especially loved the clock motif that is used in many of the projections. The lighting design is very dramatic, particularly the lightning effects that happen when the time machine travels, and so is the score (which was composed by fifteen-year-old Cameron Dietlein!). Once again, Hale delivered on the style without much of the substance and I was left feeling underwhelmed.

Note:  I have only really loved one production out of the four I've seen at Hale this season.